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Hi, everyone. My name is XX, my height is 175cm and my weight is 60KG. I am from XX. I love football and swimming. Now I am studying at the Air Crew Institute of China Civil Aviation Flight University. Thank you.

My hometown is a city called Rizhao in Shandong province.It's a beautiful city located at the east coast of China.I lived there for 20 years.I love it and am also curious about the world out of it at the same time. I am full of imaginatioin about the sky since I was very young,I imagin that someday I could fly in the sky by driving a plane,far from the surface and close to the clouds,overlooking the moutains and lakes. Today, I have a chance here that can make my dreams come true.To become a pilot of Shenzhen Airlines.I know it would be a long way for me till i became a experienced driver,but I determine to devote all myself to this objective. 你觉得哪句不合适，我调整一下。 你第二段用法问题有点多，我没给你列出来，给你写了一段，你最好查查字典，理解一下，因为你原来那个说法，说出去漏洞百出，别嫌我说得不好听，你不是要过面试吗，最好听取别人的建议。 Goodmorning, i'm glad to be here for this interview, now let me in troduce myself, my name is MaJi, 22 years old now, i graduated from...in july.2014. There are there members in my family. My father ,my mother and I。i'm the only son, we all love our family。 my father have a stone factory,（不知道你这个Stone factory是不是采矿工厂的意思，但是正常应该说：mining factory） and my mother is a housewife, she has to stay at home and deal with the housework everyday(我知道你想表达你妈妈是家庭主妇，总呆在家里，但是stay inside的意思是‘在。。。里面’的意思，没有‘在家里’的意思。stay at home才是).i have a very happy family. 下面的怎么翻译： 我享受这份工作，而不用再为我要做什么工作而苦恼（what should i working for）而苦恼； 我对即将到来的工作充满了热情。 I will enjoy this job，without worrying about what i should work for。I am full of pasion to embrace it。