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我在美国上学，我来帮帮你吧。 很多东西不能直译的，要知道语言是不同的。 Three years ago, my father worked in the university of california as an accessing professor(或者bookman doctor，具体不知道，自己选择），and my mom and i took a trip there for two weeks visting my dad in the summer vocation the next year. During that time, i visited the high school there in the united states, talked to the the amecican high school students and visiting larges numbers places of interest there as well. Furthermore, i travelled from the eat coast to the west and had and visited plenty of famous city in US such as Nweyork, Boston,washington D.C, LA and 长滩（这个没听过不会翻译）， in addition of that, i have also been to ............(地名自己写吧）. in particular, my mom took me to Havard Uni, MIT, PrinceTon Uni........(这些是世界知名学府这个弱智都知道，更不用说签证官）Since the my age was too young, my first tavel to the united states is only because that there is a huge world out of my home country, as well as some great places to go and see. but this trip, my view was enlarged and provide me an opportunity to encounter the different culture, i found that there a many diversities between china and america. So for that reason, i want to receive further education there.

Comes the American short two years, caused me to discover more than an surface US, has awakened my many ambushes' individualities: The independence, the responsibility, exert oneself, patriotically, I saw the American sunlight at the same time, gloomy one side, which regardless of all drove at the same time I had to be more outstanding. I have the west two kind of different cultural contexts, I have accepted Chinese and the American two kind of completely different middle schools' education patterns, I have grasped the Chinese and English two different languages, I have the Chinese and American two countries the life study experiences, experiences through mine US, had thoroughly understood my Chinese culture, center western culture occurring together has flashed before one kind of sincere gloss on my body, this is a middle-school student's rare experience, in particular a Chinese student, this is my superiority is at. If I can become you the student, if you gave me this to display the potential the platform, I could more outstanding, was more outstanding, also could increase your school multiplicity (Diversity), from now on will be able fully to demonstrate my talent, demonstrated my creativity, enriched my multi- colors life. After studies becomes, I can mine achievement repayment for mine country, because regardless of I do walk to where all represent a Chinese's image, future I will be able mine outstanding repayment for mine university, because I to will be able to enter your school to feel the glory, also certainly could enable you for once to have my this student to feel proud. __________________________ LZ 分分