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求英语高手帮我将一段中文翻译成英文!!谢谢!!!(不要机翻)
Napoleon · Bonaparte, the French Emperor in the first ruling, the French Republic and the first Empire, was born in France Corsica, is a prominent military genius. He repeatedly beat baowang invasion of the United Democrats Party rebel and anti-law, defending France revolution. He promulgated the civil code is a legislative blueprint of the future generations of capitalist countries. Several times during his presidency to its foreign aggrandizement, forming a huge Empire system, creating a series of military miracle. 1812 defeat in Russia, was devastated; 1814 against French troops ousted. 1815 restoration, subsequently lost the battle of Waterloo, and was exiled to Saint Helena. Died in 1821, 1840 the remains were ceremoniously buried in the Seine in Paris.
求英语高手帮忙把以下文章翻译成英文!不要机翻的,谢谢!
Five, at the beginning of the research results of the 1 experiments involved in area 1) has 16 classes in grade 2010 in the large-scale use of online scoring system for a semester, to test up to 470 the number of people. At the end of the semester received 470 questionnaires. 2) the project in the 2011 English professional two administrative class (80 people) and 2012 level 6 administrative class (320 people) applicable. 2 the initial research results of L in 2012 July received 470 copies of questionnaires. The students on the system view is: 1) 96.3% of the students think that online essay scoring system is relatively large or great help for themselves; 2) is almost all students (99.1%) said to the students around the recommend the use of the system. 3) 100% of the students said they would use the system to improve English writing in the future under the condition of no teacher. 4) 98.9% of the students think the online scoring system and traditional teacher evaluation combined with the effect will be better; the rest of the individual students think traditional correction is more suitable for their own. 5) 98.3% (462) of the students think that the system is real to reflect their English level; 6) 97.2% (457) of the students said that every time carefully read the writing comments, that reviews more correctly, and the rest of the students even read reviews, but it is not clear what the comments are not accurate. L due to the initial system with score, the students put forward some suggestions for the revision of system function: 1) increase the corresponding example analysis and the beautiful words; 2) there are lots of fuzzy information in whispers warnings, the main reason is the imperfect corpus information. Want to be able to combine the network increase corpus information, improve the score of quality; 3) offer online consulting function or a combination of traditional essay scoring, get more accurate feedback information; 4) the scoring system focuses on the spelling in word sentence opinions, but in terms of content and structure of the lack of specific comments or opinions; 5) hope given the template sentence; 6) in the changing composition only the last submission, hope to be able to retain every change information, to focus on their own improvement; 7) to provide more synonyms or replace the word usage information; 8) advice and tips provide syntactic change more; 9) provide the sharing function among the students, the good sentences or the selected shared; 10) increase the students in discussions between function, for some personal problems can in this platform ang and other students and teachers to discuss and share; 11) added to allow reading other classmates composition function; 12) increase the voice or video function on the platform; 13) prompt composition for excellent pointed out. At the same time, increase the confidence; 14) reviews some stereotyped, Should be more personalized; 15) changes in the composition according to the prompt, sometimes writing score will be lower than the previous scores; conclusion: This is a preliminary study on a semester of large-scale use of scoring system. From the data show the students on the online system by curiosity to the actual operation, most of the students take the positive attitude of acceptance, and with a high evaluation, consider the system has obvious improvement of your own writing level, especially can get timely information feedback in the absence of tutoring case. At the same time for teachers, largely reducing the burden of the teachers; reform of the new teaching mode, can at any time to monitor the composition between individual students, in order to effectively formulate and adjust the teaching mode and content. Which laid a solid foundation for the next stage of research.
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